The cost of traveling is normally much higher than the cost of staying at home. Do you think traveling is necessary for good quality of life?
Undoubtedly, in these days there is a heated debate among people about cost of travelling and some argue it is best to stay home than travelling. while it is true in terms of saving money, but my opinion is that travelling helps people in different ways. In this essay, I shall describe both positive and negative effects of travelling followed by a detailed conclusion.
There are many reasons why people believe travelling is fun. one of them is that they get to see different places. another fact is that not only it provides fun, but also it helps to relieve stress and fatigue. For an example, a driver who works full-time every day gets bored much often. it also increases his adrenaline levels due to heavy congestions and careless drivers. So if he takes a break from work it certainly helps him to calm down and to relax. In most of the times travelling is not costly. We just need to find a free time for ourselves.
For people who argue travelling is costly have a different view and say it drains one's earnings easily. some say that spending time at home with family is most recommended as it does not involve costs. another disadvantage of travelling people argue is the security of you and your belongings while you were gone.
In conclusion, while there are compelling facts to support both sides of the argument, but I profoundly believe that travelling is necessary for good quality of life. I strongly suggest people to take a break from work at least once in a while to explore the outdoors and enjoy the beauty of different places on Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, at least, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68231046931 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57518922132 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1850021316 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279346773065 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789479341794 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726250869622 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1645592268 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484768184837 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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