Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping, etc. and whether you support them or not.
In this day and age, the publicity of extreme sport has become a controversial issue among all people. Although doing some dangerous activity is regarded by some people as both constructive and confident, yet, many hold an opponent’s view. I am highly inclined to believe that doing such sports are profoundly beneficial. This essay will examine the reasons, by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why I support extreme activity like bungee jumping. Firstly, an array of inhabitant argued that doing high-risk activity are highly related to improving self-confidence and independence of a person. Secondly, they use an essential valid logic to support that some of these events could lead to young people facing up to their fears. For instance, an academic research conducted by Melbourn University shows that the effect of facing with hard issues could lead to better team-work ability conjunction with better decision making in a terrible situation. Furthermore, the results revealed that not only doing extreme sport could lead to self-esteem but also could bring lots of fame and money to youngsters.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that doing a dangerous activity can provide people with various negative points. For example, in rock-climbing, if the rope breaks when participant involved, it could have many harmful results like severe harm or even death. Moreover, based on an academic research conducted by Tehran University, young generation who gravitate to this kind of activity, may leave behind of their college curriculum due to pay too much attention to doing exciting activities.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, my sentiment is that the benefit of vigorous activities far outweighs its drawbacks. The significance of extreme sports not only is wholly proved but also should be addressed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37873754153 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87547621862 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634551495017 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3280903247 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138454372693 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531345747216 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826175630327 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752927065563 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306485568332 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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