Different people are successful in different fields, some people work long hours to get success, but other feels that we should spend free time for fun than money. Which style closely relate to you and explain your openion?
The importance of working hard or spending more free time for fun rather than earning money, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of topic has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on peole working behaviour and practices in recent years. It can be said that the evn some peole believe in spending free time for fun, but i strongly believe in working long hours to get success.
At the outset, there are numerious reasons why working long hours to get success rather than having free time for fun, but the most conspicious one steams from the fact that working long hour will enhance you eith better work experience and energy to built future career. For example, a survey conducted recently states that the all successful person has invested their long hours in work. Furthermore, if we work for long hour then we are building good habit of working and earning enough money asuall. Thus, this is why hard working is beneficial.
Nevertheless, there reamains the same drawbacks, which can certainly overhlam the potential influence of working long hours to get success rather than having free time for fun, bUt the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that we need rest, family time and intertainments in our daily life. As an illustration, a studies shows a person onely regularly working for long period of time will have not have enough friends and happy family member.
From the above discussion, it can be concluded that the people work long hours to get success rather than spending free time for fun and money is prominent, but the social life of individuals should not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a study' or simply 'studies'?
Suggestion: a study; studies
... in our daily life. As an illustration, a studies shows a person onely regularly working ...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...person onely regularly working for long period of time will have not have enough friends and h...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...g for long period of time will have not have enough friends and happy family member....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91901408451 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5208193809 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4051118618 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.7 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398436320747 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175367646424 0.0925447433944 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988857725 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275197673289 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444523599342 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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