Space travel in recent times has increased dramatically, and the money spend on space travel is humongous. There is a constant debate about the money departed on space travel and it is believed that current critical muddle are more important than space travel. I agree to the affirmation that current problem faces by humans are more important than space travel.
Space exploration has raised a wide range of opportunities to humans and it is predicted that in recent times people will go out on Moon for a vacation. But, did we really know the consequences of space travel? answer is no. The major threats pertained by space travel is the amount of money involved in space exploration, other than money the space debris created by spacecrafts is reaching at a crucial point leading to a massive explosive that may lead to the destruction of the entire humanity.
We have a plethora of other crucial problems faced by humans, such as lack of food and basic commodities, lack of good health, poverty, unemployment, people dying because of certain epidemic diseases, pollution and increase in population. Although, there are many developed nation but, still these crucial problems are a daunting factor for under developed or developing nations. Rather than wasting money on space travel we should understand the importance of stream lining these issues.
Government should understand that we are wasting a lot of money on space travel which needs to be restricted to control the other vital issues in society.
In conclusion, it is a grim matter of concern that we are currently dealing with a lot of traumatic issues which is not controlled by government. There is a rising rate of inequality in society and rather than dealing with crucial problems we are exploring space which in my opinion is a wastage of time and money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, really, so, still, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00326797386 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75364565591 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2326741376 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31246282045 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123913054958 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910582646047 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172999152307 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939696676255 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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