Do you think cardless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the effect of the rise of credit card use in our predominantly cashless society. there is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in the world. In my opinion, a cashless society has more positive impacts than negative in the globe.
To commence with, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one not only includes more convenient than by cash but also includes easy to be recorded, and the ability to view real-time bank balance online. According to the research conducted by Western Sydney University, 90 percent of participants were in favour of the benefits showered by the cashless society. Secondly, other key aspects related to the vitality of the topic are to improve the efficiency of purchasing and fewer threats of robbery.
On the other hand, critics may point out that the most significant disadvantage of the above-mentioned topic is not only limited to encourage the cybercrime but also includes the budget deficit, and consumers tend to forget how much they have to spend. For instance, a survey conducted by the government of australia reveals that the negative impact of the cashless society is harsh and should never be underestimated or ignored.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of australia is taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impacts of the cashless society. citizens are being encouraged to follow the applicable laws as well as rules and regulations to promote prosperity and positive environment in the world.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the benefits of the cashless society are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12627986348 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90080304319 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0817108865 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0281333591927 0.242375264174 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0110758737265 0.0925447433944 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194446824095 0.071462118173 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0179955112662 0.151781067708 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155496104297 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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