Do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
The society we are living moving towards more into cashless was a controversial topic. Many people claim that doing transaction with cards and promoting cashless transactions are very beneficial. Others reject this notion and argue that these digital transactions are more useful to people living in urban areas not to the remote areas. In my opinion, the advantages of cashless society will improve the country's economic growth . This essay would further elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of cash less payments in modern world and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, there are several benefits associated with digital transactions in fast growing generation. Firstly, the important benefit of cashless economy is easier to track the black money and illegal transactions happening in the society. Secondly, it improves transparency with the cash less options throughout the country and society. Thirdly, it reduces effort to carry cash and danger to avoid cash theft. For instance, recently in India, Prime Minister Modi has introduced digital transaction payments which reduced crime rates from 60% to 20%. This example clearly exemplifies us cashless transactions has numerous benefits to the society and it will decrease crime rates.
However, certain group of people argue that there are few disadvantages. People having half knowledge of digital payments are exposed to cyber fraud and losing their hard earned money to online scams. For instance, recently in USA, a women got a call from unknown number stating that she won lottery offer of 1 million dollars and in order to claim that money, they asked her to pay 1000 dollars to process the amount. The above example clearly tells us people don't have full knowledge and exposure to digital transactions. Moreover, distant remote villages may not have such advancements.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that even though cash less transactions has some disadvantages it is beneficial to society and economy of the country and further every country should go cashless and lead a secure life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1207.87684729 149% => OK
No of words: 333.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39039039039 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79654983031 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 139.433497537 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 379.143842365 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6281675795 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126710762234 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411768270191 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545336325503 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825084756172 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684255878137 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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