Do you think that the place where the person grew has an influence in his accomplishment? Explain with example.
The importance of influence on his accomplishment which was always debatable has now become more controversy with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this nation. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the further proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that when a person grows has an influence on his accomplishment. Another, pivotal aspect of this argument is that accomplishment is bad impact on the person who grown in other nation. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that the birthplace of person is gives positive thoughts. Besides, it can be effect on person grow. Hence, it is apparently why many are against this trends.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of person grow has an influence on his accomplishment are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23913043478 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9498678321 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5972594448 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.416666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172310874946 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615547424596 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676217627345 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116719980664 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430892755262 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.