Effective learning requires time peace and comfort and should not be mixed with employment. Employment and study do not go hand in hand. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
The contemporary world of human lives which is being shaped by latest trends and approaches, whether, should effective learning requires time, peace and comfort, to not be mixed with employment has become a moot point for discussion. Before coming down the conclusion, I would like to list down in my point of this specific topic in my forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, most people like to attain the higher education however, due to that some people doing jobs to pay their high fees at the universities, and colleges. Effective learning needs more peace, time, and comfort, also because knowledge comes from experience observations. Without it students face so many difficulties in their future plans. Although we can say it is necessary for a student to concentrate on his studies only but due to bad financial conditions student do job in early age years. As a illustration, one of my friend did job with studies and gained good experience from the job, therefore it helped him to acquiring good job opportunities.
On the other hand, some people say that it is very difficult to tackle both stress of study and job together. Sometimes student take so much burden on him and it will be harmful for his health also. Apart from this, companies want experienced workers that are why student do job and not give their 100% result on their studies due to diverted mind. Moreover, students get experiences from good companies and achieve their goals by doing interesting jobs.
After pondering over great deals and thoughts and deliberations with myself on this topic, I have come to the conclusion that, indeed there are many advantages of doing job while learning but we cannot ignore the drawback of these aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 469, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'conditions'' or 'condition's'?
Suggestion: conditions'; condition's
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Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s student do job in early age years. As a illustration, one of my friend did job ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...m and it will be harmful for his health also. Apart from this, companies want experi...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t ignore the drawback of these aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98965517241 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74463913753 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9058908401 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219539230927 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735075374576 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699969692751 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12618779059 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043182567744 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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