Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real change can only be achieved at government level. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this point? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Environmental concerns are the top priority for everyone in this world. While some people think that it is beyond the control of an individual and government has to step in to strengthen the policies, many feel that individuals play a vital role in addressing the environmental problems. This essay will explain why each one of us are more responsible in protecting the environment.
Firstly, Individuals have to start using public transport instead of our own vehicle. This step will control the air pollution to an extent. We can plant trees in our surroundings and avoid plastics as much as possible.Intead, we can use eco-friendly alternatives. In addition, proper disposal of waste is also a significant step towards protecting the earth. Using solar energy can go a long way in making the environment clean and safe. As a saying goes, “Small drops form a big ocean” ,every baby step we take will contribute insaving the earth and its species.
Some people feel that only government can control this deleterious situation. Conspicuously, though government can bring in strict laws and regulation, the success lies the hands of the individuals who can really make it happen. As per the latest survey, 79% of the total population in India today vividly participate in “Green India “initiatives such as segregation of waste, cleaning of water bodies and others.
To recapitulate, individuals play significant role in protecting the environment and making the earth a better place for the future generations to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun feel seems to be countable; consider using: 'many feels'.
Suggestion: many feels
... to step in to strengthen the policies, many feel that individuals play a vital role in a...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Intead
... and avoid plastics as much as possible.Intead, we can use eco-friendly alternatives. ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...'Small drops form a big ocean' ,every baby step we take will contribute ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, so, then, while, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29674796748 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24027600544 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6323444383 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114174441777 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043185332019 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329208027072 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658304615715 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305479252547 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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