Adventure activities such as skiing, water rafting can lead to serious mishaps and should be condemned. While some people believe that such adventure activities should be prohibited, others maintain that they are fun and should be continued. This essay will discuss why such life threatening sports should be banned.
Adventure activities since the beginning have caused several people their life or serious injuries. Its been reported several times in newspapers that a raft could not hold in a rapidly flowing river causing it to turn upside down with passengers on board. Accidents have also occurred several times during sky diving and skiing causing death. Due to the increase in number of such accidents, the government should impose bans on such sports that could cause someone his/her life.
Adventure activities can be fun for several people and its not that every time such accidents occur. These people though do not realize the extent of risks involved. Fun just lasts for a few minutes but a life of several years is put at risk just for those few minutes. Also, most vendors do not even have an official license for conducting these activities. Driving car at high speed too seems fun; however, its extremely risky as several accidents occur due to over speeding.
This essay argued that why adventure activities that could cost someone his life, should be banned. While there are some compelling arguments on the other side, the advantages of prohibiting such activities far outweigh its disadvantages. In my opinion, such activities if possible should be banned and a similar experience virtual environment should tried to be built.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...have also occurred several times during sky diving and skiing causing death. Due to the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18656716418 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56454873711 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3731266413 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178925186431 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675362787388 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720362642501 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121810803659 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871974745169 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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