government need to change the policy to ensure the 50% of CEO positions are belong to female
Over the top 500 companies, most of them are managed by male CEO. Some people think that the government need to change the policy to ensure the 50% of CEO positions are belong to female. This essay will discuss why it is unnecessary that 50% of CEO position must make up by female.
First of all, the person who take the executive business position must have adequate experience on the job or even higher education qualification. Female are able to compete with male when they have the same experience or same qualification. For example, Lily has 10 years experiences while Tommy only got 5 years experiences, this make Lily more qualify to take the position. Hence, everyone deserve the chance to compete when they have similar qualification.
Furthermore, executive business position is never about the gender but responsibility. Although a lot of female had taken a job after graduate from school, however some of them choose to stay home after their marriage. For example, 90% of my friend’s company is male although the company doesn’t have the policy of hiring male only. The phenomena explained that why female is outnumber than male at the workplace.
In a nutshell, the executive business position does not need to be equally split into male and female because it is depend to the work experience, education qualification and also responsibility. In my opinion, the government shouldn’t change policy to make the position equally make up by male and female.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
... to ensure the 50% of CEO positions are belong to female. This essay will discuss why ...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outnumbered'.
Suggestion: outnumbered
... phenomena explained that why female is outnumber than male at the workplace. In a nutsh...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...plit into male and female because it is depend to the work experience, education quali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0693877551 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95591374578 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3677731355 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5384615385 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31424665283 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111876771583 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167465746485 0.071462118173 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201688126709 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167382331811 0.0609392437508 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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