If voting is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about “The nature of democracy”?
These days, there is substantive controversy among individuals whether voting should be required in a democratic society. The vast majority of people open that there should an opportunity to decide if they want to place their vote or not at all. However, others refute this supposition and think that it has adverse ramifications. In my view, I have a strong belief that every individual who lives under a democratic country should still be composed to vote. This essay will elucidate the pertinent points of view to substantiate my assertion.
On the one hand, one potential benefit of having the freedom to vote is that it will greatly affect the future not only of the country but also the next generation, because people need to choose a deserving leader who can bring the a necessary change for the betterment of the country. For instance, the president of the Republic of the Philippines, Rodrigo Duterte, received the highest number of votes all over the country because they believe that he is capable of changing the country for good.
On the other hand, despite a substantial advantages of compulsory voting, there is a drawback as well. One conspicuous disadvantage is the corrupt political candidates may try to gain popularity among its constituents by vote buying and will increase the chance of getting in to the position in the government.
This essay discussed my position in the argument whether people should be required to vote in a democratic society. In my opinion, overall this is necessary for the whole country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...choose a deserving leader who can bring the a necessary change for the betterment of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, well, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0390625 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86000462672 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4985745246 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10604378079 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416057851948 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381039820287 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063966811435 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182939935327 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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