Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?
One of the most conspicuous trends of the today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the effects of lifestyle of celebrities on mentality of common man. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns is one’s life. however, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
On the other hand, there are several reasons behind this statement but first and foremost is that models and film stars who looks nearly perfect because of photo shop effects have given rise to a generation obsessed with looking perfect. Even extramarital relationships are now considered perfectly acceptable because several celebrities have multiple partners. Moreover, in modern world mostly people believe in multiple partners because of celebrities. Besides this, a large number of celebrities don’t set good examples. many of them are known for their extravagant and wasteful lifestyle. For instance, mostly celebrities earn millions of dollars every year and they spent a lot of money on expensive designer garments and drive super luxury cars.
On the other hand, celebrities are also human beings and they have also a lot of weaknesses. however, we do have something to learn from these famous people. they are achievers. many of them had humble beginnings, still they rose to fame because of determination and hard work. we can achieve the same if we make sincere attempt.
To sum up, celebrities plays pivotal role in human beings life they inspire him in certain ways. So, according to me people follow such a celebrities who achieve success through of their hard work
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11278195489 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7768088963 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0164194429 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961014914035 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030971891229 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412875295712 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561823386209 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265884818947 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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