Impact of television shows on society?
The importance of the impact of television shows on society, which has always been debatable has now upsurge a lots of arguments in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of imitating celebrities has sparked controversy over the potential of this trends is an integral part of the society in recent years. it can be agree that the upside of imitating celebrities are instruments indeed, however it has some various drawbacks as well. this essay will be elaborate on both assertions and provide a well-weighted conclusion.
At the outer, there are numerous reasons why the impact of television shows on society is unreservedly salients, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that that advantage. Therefore, it is vital time to appreciate both the significance of the impact of television shows on society for the overall amelioration of society.
However, it has some various people who choose to think differently and hold on opposing viewpoint, which can certainly overwhelm substantial influence on the impact of television shows on society? Nevertheless, the contradiction is rooted in the fact that disadvantage,Hence , it is apparent that the downside of the impact of television shows on society cannot be overlooked.
The above presented dissertation illustrate both perspectives about the impact of the television shows the society. While it is evident it has various benefits, although its deleterious effect cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39574468085 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25247955266 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544680851064 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6348288465 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.520282214307 0.242375264174 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210951968699 0.0925447433944 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167581573295 0.071462118173 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343315521586 0.151781067708 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153068569358 0.0609392437508 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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