Impact of television shows on society

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Impact of television shows on society

The implication of Impact of television shows on society, which is fairly debatable, has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. I believe that there are many impacts of television shows on society and this will be further discussed before reaching a logical conclusion.

At the outside there are diverse reason why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that this not trivial reason because most ladies have a hobby of television shows she’s spend all time in watch television and this can be a contribute factor to because all family is depend on ladies watch television shows she change own behavior for instance a research invariable shows that this is bad impact on ladies of house work.

Nevertheless, some people adopt on opposing view and tend to believe that on think about me all ladies are not same. Some ladies watch in just free time and she is watch good episode like family type this is not bad can be addressed with some positive facets as well as there are innumerable facts in favor of that, but the most pre dominate one stems.

In conclusion, I think this depend on society because all finger are not same. Some ladies create big issue after watch television.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ication of Impact of television shows on society, which is fairly debatable, has ...
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...ime in watch television and this can be a contribute factor to because all family is depend ...
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...tribute factor to because all family is depend on ladies watch television shows she ch...
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...nd on ladies watch television shows she change own behavior for instance a research in...
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... are innumerable facts in favor of that, but the most pre dominate one stems. I...
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...reate big issue after watch television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96086956522 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5231667623 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.189279953 50.4703680194 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.625 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290685163123 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131965928426 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137911803003 0.071462118173 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175149753996 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155872219857 0.0609392437508 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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