The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give examples.
The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give examples.
In modern era, technology has advanced enormously. In this essay I shall describe in agreement that the most important inventions of our era are cars and airplanes. In addition, the role they play has significant importance in our traveling experiences.
There are many reasons why cars and airplanes have increased and advanced. One reason is because in order to travel faster from point A to point B, humans need the efficiency in the type of machinery they use. Therefore, engineers are using innovative performances in thinking, designing and customizing ideas in order to create the cars they need. Although, the way we travel has changes immensely, the amount of people traveling has increased as well. As a result, we now use larger car's such as busses, vans and other models to fit in more people when commuting to city centers. There is a positively increasing number of people reaching their dream destinations all over the world.
Many different countries and their government have created world class traveling means for people. In order to support the populations needs railroads, airports and roadways have been extended. Research suggests, that in an American family of four at least there are two or there cars in the driveway. Therefore, having the ability to travel anywhere at anytime incentives people to reach destinations much easier than before. Another great example is the use of GPS systems for having access to road maps, internet use helps us connect to one another, airplanes make us reach destinations faster than before.
In conclusion, the cultural and social needs of the general public have been globalized in the way we travel. Humans are traveling increasingly more in the past decade. In addition, we have developed new cutting edge technology to connect with one another.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ions of our era are cars and airplanes. In addition, the role they play has signif...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...eam destinations all over the world. Many different countries and their government have cre...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...n, the cultural and social needs of the general public have been globalized in the way we trav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77905391678 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9469185758 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210457129064 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946778596285 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180659648099 0.071462118173 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255487883288 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.375974596803 0.0609392437508 617% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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