Internet will soon replace books, do you agree or disagree?
Technology has proved to be a blessing in this era. Talking about connecting people or enhancing the knowledge or getting exposure each and everything depends on advancement of technology. The sustainable development of increased internet usage has sparked the controversial impact of growth seen in technical field over year. I agree that internet can easily replace the books but the book study has its unique benefits.
To begin with, internet has made the life easier including classroom studies by its audio-visual impacts. It facilitates better learning by enhancing imaginative skills, also the world wide exposure helps learn and gain everything quickly. Moreover, internet had made all the material available in a single click and further it provides the platform to study and give exam according to own suitability.
Nevertheless, internet may reach the heights but books have their own impact on learning. As we know, internet and studying online causes distractions whereas books bring in better focus, increased concentration hence improved results. Further highlighting, books provide time to grasp and makes studying stress free with least peer pressure and comparison.
To recapitulate, books and internet both are two sides of coin and so they go hand in hand. Books and internet together can make students gain desired results. Also it helps them meet the standards of developing education system and have a positive comparison. Hence, both are irreplaceable and hold equal importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53448275862 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14164555604 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1014385959 50.4703680194 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.727272727 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.33497536946 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104453654449 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356182653438 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425392834506 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643265363338 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257377094528 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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