It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people become more aware that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is one of the biggest problems which people are facing. While some people believe that it can be acceptable, others advocate that it may cause some issues. In my opinion, it is not a wise choice to get married before finishing school or getting a job, which can be supported by the reasons as follows.
It is reasonable for me to believe that getting married before finishing school or getting a job can create a financial burden, which is understandable because young couples do not have a stable income. To be more specific, all aspects of life incur costs when supporting a family, such as buying a house or purchasing a vehicle, thus put lots of stress on young couples. To further support the above statement, my brother got married when he was a second-year undergraduate student, but they kept asking my parents for money because they were unable to afford their daily bills as they lacked stable income.
Besides, the young couple is unable to take on family responsibilities under high pressure, which is reasonable because they are mentally immature. Specifically, young people are not mature enough and easily become sensitive and emotional when facing the stress of life, thus cause conflicts or arguments. A recent study from Oxford University can prove this. The study pointed out that 76% of young couple divorces because of quarrels caused by family chores.
In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract public attention, we may safely conclude that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a reasonable choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, second, so, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06474820144 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71681577134 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1941684407 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27521347033 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11507125275 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15047991713 0.071462118173 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188899245996 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125853437191 0.0609392437508 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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