It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The substantial influences of being in an emotional relationship at the early age have sparked a controversy amongst the public. Although specific arguments claimed that students marriages are beneficial, a group of intellectuals debate otherwise and hold opponent's view. I am highly inclined to believe that school certificate is a must do and have been supported widely by communities. The agenda of this article is to analyze both sides of the argument and will lead to a legitimate conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why child marriages are supported, but the most remarkable one lies in the fact that they join job markets sooner. Based on a recent study result, which conducted by a group of profound social psychologists from a renowned university, 85% of employees without high school degree get fired after 5 years. Moreover, raising a baby and having a family is costly, time-consuming, and lead to a depression. So the correlation between leaving school and family sustainability, family economic, child psychology, family strength, as well as job satisfaction is obvious.
Contrary to popular belief, there remain drawbacks clouded up the potential influences of late marriages, but the most alarming one rooted in the fact that old couples are less intended to have more than two kids. For instance, my parents were getting married when they were over 35 years old and had university certificates, and I do not have any sibling. Hence, the importance getting married before finding an occupation or finishing university and its detriments which may have effect adversely on life satisfaction, future wealth, personal achievements, and occupation improvement can be seen with clarity.
To recapitulate, while there are several divergent opinions on both sides, my sentiment is that school graduation gets more credence than getting married or finding office positions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40939597315 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09328997395 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 139.433497537 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657718120805 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8745053787 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18055366888 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539520500798 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057720290203 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107128222151 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539049163118 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.