Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
The substantial influences of action movies have sparked a controversy amongst the public all around the world. Although specific arguments claimed that action scene might be interesting, a group of intellectuals debate otherwise and hold opponent's view. I am highly inclined to believe that social criminals have been following violent movies. The assertion of this article is analyzing both sides before a legitimate conclusion could be drawn.
From the outset, there are numerous reasons why action movies are supported, but the most remarkable one lies in the fact that they have a huge fan. For instance, an outcome of a recent study, conducted by social activists from a profound university shows that the violence movie characters will be copied by teenagers in high school. Moreover, recently it is alleged that criminals are spending 200$ per month for renting violence games and movies. Hence, the impacts of action video games on pupils mind, moral rate, crime rate, as well as number of imprisoned teenagers can be seen with clarity.
Despite evidence to the contrary, there remain drawbacks clouded up the potential influences of action films revenue, but the most alarming one rooted in the fact that many Hollywood movies are not classified for teenagers and should be viewed by parents. For example, when I was a kid, my father always showed concerned about the age rating of the film. In addition to this information, the role of teachers should not be hindered. Watching behind the scenes and actors makeup can help to shed a light into the dark aspects of action movies.
To recapitulate after a plenty of deliberations and thoughts with myself, my sentiments is that violent movies have the huge impacts on criminals minds
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
... is alleged that criminals are spending 200$ per month for renting violence games an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14736842105 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6785975024 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7835142547 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100290454271 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340980804973 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305226265707 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641364732925 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242853372967 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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