Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Beyond doubt, portraying violence on TV and in the movies have been much increased in the last few decades. One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is that violent movies make people become criminals easily even though it varies from person to person. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad problems among people, especially children. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are many arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that violent movies create adverse effects on the people, which can lead to bad experiences. Not only this effect is a sign of criminalist, but it also helps in involving them in criminal activities, which can result in a poor lifestyle. For example, people, who watch violent movies, try to replicate in life because their favorite actor does the same in the movies, and they easily inspired them. Needless to say, all these demerits stand people in bad stead, as far as to resemblance of violent movie activities and involved in criminal activities is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that children get impacted easily. Besides, due to excessive scenes of violent movies, it ultimately makes them become criminals because most of the children impress their own favorite actor. Hence, it is clear why many are in favor of the criminalist.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that people become criminals as they watch violent movies that are telecasted on TV or in the movies. Additionally, entertainment is of paramount importance but when it comes to personal life, our career is more important than entertainment. There is a line between use and abuse, and we should teach this to our people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10580204778 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81127587123 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6532750504 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7333333333 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224700775145 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660585901724 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689502038568 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134136930599 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624811427035 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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