Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is colossal upsurge is the number of people beleiving that watching violent movies effects mind state.There is widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one's life.However,I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of argumentsin favour of my stance.The most preponderant one is that violent movies increase violence in society and people who are waching them are more likely to become criminalscan not only contribute to increase crime rate ,but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields.Thaks to wide range of advantages it offers,not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective,but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives,with much ease,efficacy and convenience.Needless to say,all these merits stand one in good stead,as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas.Besides,only when one follow such essential attributes as responsibility,dedication and preserverance.Hence,it is apparent why many are in favour of my argue.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits it offers are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45205479452 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60927060538 2.71678728327 133% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.5024630542 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.662176979 50.4703680194 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.5 104.977214359 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.75 20.9669160288 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.33497536946 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164454731488 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765945670673 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070848454856 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765945670673 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070848454856 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 12.6369458128 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 53.1260098522 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.9458128079 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.3980295567 227% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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