It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good
choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is getting married before completing education or starting an employment. There is a widespread worry that this would lead to a myriad of concerns younger’s future life. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There are numerous od arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that when youngers getting married before completing their educations and obtaining a suitable job for their stable they will be missed lot of crucial points in their lives because they have to fulfill numerous responsibilities in their marriage lives for the other party. Not only do they have to provide others needs, but they also have to look after them and earn for them. Nevertheless, to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on students.
Another pivotal aspect is that some people consider marriage as a strong bond between two persons in physical, emotional, and economical. Besides, starting a married life, they can first finish their education, second obtaining a better job and then they can start a married life. It is apparent why many are in favour of the topic.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite of some benefits, the drawbacks of topic are too dire to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07305936073 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86207044245 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5089420431 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11721214981 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332999059315 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510449549641 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601863603738 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351034022678 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.