It is important for the children to study a film at the school to learn literature? To what extent you agree and use example?

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It is important for the children to study a film at the school to learn literature? To what extent you agree and use example?

The importance of the literature is having a inevitable and indispensable role in the life of everyone. there are variety of ways are available to stay connected with our roots and to apprise the upcoming generation regarding history. Where a significant number of people think that to learn the literature, a movie is one of the best option, other asserts against this kind of the notion. I strongly agreed about the former statement and will elucidate further using required examples and arguments.

There are myriad of reasons to support this argument, but the most preponderant one is the interest and focus of the children. In the fast growing and booming era, no one is having time to spent an ample amount of time, to study the literature and keep remember the historical events. Mostly,personal time is occupied with social websites, mobile phone and online games. These kinds of the options are alluring and attracting the children significantly.

Another pivotal aspect to support this argument is spending time with the literature seems boring sometimes. However, as the students are more occuping with other subjects and due to lack of the time, distributing knowledge with the help of the movie not only augment the interest in the students, but it also helps to remember the things, the characters and the events for longer duration. In addition, introducing interesting music in the film can leads to the better experiences.

To recapitulate, to improve the knowledge and the interest in the students and to learn the literature, a film can be a one of the best ideas which help them to remember the characters and the events.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , personal
...p remember the historical events. Mostly,personal time is occupied with social websites, ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ucing interesting music in the film can leads to the better experiences. To recapi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86125842405 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8565680257 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14418027074 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048863606091 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356324683129 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079678658885 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286872349968 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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