It is important to maintain the balance between work and other aspects of one’s life such as family and leisure activities. Please give your opinion about how important to maintain balance and why some people think it is hard to do?
The importance of finding a balance between work and other aspects whis has always been debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of to maintain to preferences has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on human psychology in recent years. it can be agreed that balance of the priority is important, but it has some drawbacks as well. this essay will elaborate both pros and cons of this happiness that coming from balanced life of people and lead to logical reason.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why people trying to finding a balance in their life but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that when the person has a stable life between work and personal space. For instance they can spend enough time to be succesful on their own carrier and on the other hand they also can feel relief without challenging themself and they can just enjoy with their personal space.
Nevertheless, there are remain some demerits which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of stay on balance between work and other aspects of one's life but the most alarming one lies in the fact that the sacrifice. As an illustration, not only to feel happy and don't give enough attention on their goals in life. Thus, trying to finding a balance can have detrimental effect when it comes to sacrifice on their on privilege and all they have to do focus what their goals during that period.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the important of balanced life is prominent, although it has a number of deleterious effects that should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82857142857 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56458414499 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2610438196 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250894852054 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103564377574 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667773173366 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150170464705 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498336542367 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.