It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship.

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It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship.

The importance/effect of It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship, which was highly debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence impact of that has It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship sparked the controversy over the potential in this trend on sometime said that friend can harm the damage friendship accuse some people has think very bad. over the recent years. It can be has agreed that some positive impacts, but some negative impacts.This essay will discuss both the aspect will lead to logical conclusion/elaborate.

At the outset, There are numerous/positive reasons impacts of this topic but one of the most conspicuous one stream is another preponderant one is that money the some people very self fish,As an example this topic is very write for friends. so, this topic plays the vital value role on this topic.

Nevertheless, some people adopt has opposing view reason trend to believe idea. As an illustration the some friend is not turn the money to friends. last but not least, this topic play the information by selfish friends because this is very wrong essay, therefore topic plays the negative role on this topic.

From what has been discussed above, it can be conclude that the impact of topic It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship are prominent, although there are number of some friend borrowing money from friends and then not turn to money. those should not be overlook

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01136363636 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84721270352 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481060606061 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.9797762665 50.4703680194 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.272727273 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50529693695 0.242375264174 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198734537218 0.0925447433944 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.28262428244 0.071462118173 395% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339027637328 0.151781067708 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.294907590308 0.0609392437508 484% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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