It is unwise to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent year there has been colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend that marriage before completing the studies is always unwise, be it an impoverished or affluent nation. Some people believe that getting married before completing studies is always a negative impact, while others disagree. In this essay, I will elaborate the negative impacts ascending in earlier marriages without any proper back-up.

At the outset, there are myriad reasons, firstly, getting married before completion of the studies led to lack of focus in schooling, Increasing in family responsibilities loose attention in schools and failure in career. For example, in countries’ like India, teenagers getting indulged themselves on studies to achieve success in careers with persevere, but due to pressure of parents on marriages causing them to devastate their future careers and resulting to halt their education. Clearly, it is highly advisable that an apropos way to focus shall be made to avert getting married before completing the schooling.

Furthermore, another pivotal facet’s comes from the fact that, the drastic effects on married life is losing of jobs. A prodigy may not be able to find a long way run in stability of jobs and thus their careers always in lack expertise as such due to responsibilities they instill. For example, In Australia, most people getting married at early stages without right jobs are in sort of pressure, tensions which they cannot accentuate in job, works and resulting to be unstable in their job careers. Apparently, in this ways lack of jobs are increasing the financial crisis and lead family’s separation.

To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that having the negative facets of married life, but the upside of negative impacts shall be frugally accentuated and suitable decisions shall be made in getting married.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40540540541 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94284488407 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6600311769 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229804346889 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940016975206 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716101716842 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136763025285 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503433376994 0.0609392437508 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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