Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive development?
In this era, we can see the revolution in every field through out the world. A number of shopping malls have been introduced where we can buy anything what we want from a needle to a car.However, these have replaced small local shops in the cities and town. In below essay I will discuss the reasons why it is a positive development in detail.
In commence with, super market is a place where one can buy anything. people do not have to roam here and there in search of items. one item is available in different color, brand and features as well. Eventually, variety makes buyer to choose wisely and enhances their interest as well to get that product. it includes food court and kids zone as well. due to families do not have any burden of their kids. that is why people are more inclined towards big shopping malls.
Furthermore, if we talk about local shops, the area of shops used to be very small. it causes less variety over there which does not attract the buyer most of the time. there is no parking space available for buyers as well. due to which customers have to do hassle to get parking.
In conclusion, i would say replacement of super markets with local shops is a positive development which made life much easier for a buyer and opens more opportunities for business class people to enhance their trade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62343096234 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40964228441 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7744469651 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208062270242 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524000246231 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816388483469 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130888041882 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775233963892 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.1260098522 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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