Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
Nowadays, the influence of law on person’s behavior has become a long-running dispute among the public all over that world, which leads to moot question “whether a law can change human behavior or not?”. It is a widely held view that enforcing several rules in the society is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the phenomenon of law enforcement plays a vital role in the behavior of each society. Therefore, I express several reasons to support this idea. First and foremost is that the crime rate and the motivation of committing the offense will be diminished. Secondly, the prevalence crimes, such as embezzlement, theft, corruption decrease in the communities. In addition to this information, the majority of laws are efficient, including the traffic light and fastening seatbelt that guarantee the people’s lives. A very tangible example to illustrate would be Thailand that smuggling the drugs were excessively prevalent, while the government could rehabilitate offenders and make a profound impact on the patterns of behavior.
However, undoubtedly law enforcement provides people with various negative points. For instance, the fear will be developed in the society due to the death penalty or prolonged captivations. Moreover, the criminals will be encouraged to revenge after prison and the aggressive behavior might be raised. A very tangible example to illustrate would be South Korea's that nation has been deprived of their civil rights because of unreasonable laws.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that imposing appropriate laws can help to the betterment of the society and patterns of behavior. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...aw on person's behavior has become a long-running dispute among the public all over that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43521594684 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08437364463 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8173503363 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213356596889 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597035778012 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894268160085 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124135565361 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620248588229 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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