Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
Recently, law regarding to changing human behavior has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "can law change human behavior?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is not highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the society standpoint, standards of behavior are bound up inextricably with social norm, which indicates they lead to both misbehavior and antisocial behavior. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between juvenile crime and youth delinquency as well as an exponential increase in street crime. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of socialization theory is correlated positively with not only modern community but also human mind.
Within the realm of justice system, without the slightest doubt, behavior changing attribute to sever legislation, in that it would come down to education, parents, and society. A salient example of such attribution is breaking law, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take criminal goals for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint injustice problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to corporal punishment, criminal rate, and even authority. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of appropriate rules in criminal deduction.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of law are of more significance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74021352313 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16380714688 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690391459075 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1974489246 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199049862825 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053490961133 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104629226601 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119585440977 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116858097721 0.0609392437508 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 55.0591133005 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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