In less developed countries, are the disadvantages from tourism as great as the advantages?
Recently, the phenomenon of the merits or demerits of the tourism industry in developing countries and their corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although this industry is beneficial as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am inclined to believe that this idea can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, the idea of the magnitude of the tourism advantages or disadvantages in developing countries can provide the society with the noticeable effects. From my own experience, when I was a university pupil, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these details. Firstly, developing and providing the facilities and infrastructures to bolster the conditions to attract the tourists is quite promount for developing countries because they bring money. Hence, this industry has a direct positive influences on boosting economy. Furthermore, the multi-national cities with different travellers have a wide range of cultures, attitudes and tasts which leads to create a droad wide of job or financial opportunities for dwellers. Moreover, tourism industry has the ability to raising the awareness of the people of these countries and instructing them to how achieve the quality in their lives.
On the one hand, there is no doubt some inhabitants asserted that tourism for the developing countries has some drawbacks. They asserted that citizens in these countries have not adequate information to behave appropriately to tourists and this issue might lead to some confrontations. Also, observing the quality life of travellers may increase the dissatisfactory feelings among the population and lead to some critiques.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of tourism are far outweigh their demerits.
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Suggestion: influence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58983050847 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19800641721 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1882407136 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170428739962 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594765663478 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769713755632 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893958778767 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532269278716 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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