Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, export and import business is at its peak. However, this business was also used by our forefathers to make more money. Many individuals think that nations should produce food for the country first and try to import less. In my opinion, it is totally fine to import and export because it provide more occupation and increase economy of the country. I will discuss the same in the below paragraphs.
At the outset, sharing resources from countries has been always beneficial for mankind. For instance, India is famous for its spice production. (sentence missing) This helps farmers and labor which works in industries to make final product and packing. So it can be said that sending products to other countries can help to increase jobs.
Furthermore, import and export is also crucial for the economy of the countries. It is clear that government always take extra money from other nations and this increase economy. In a study from 2000 to 2010, India has earned a lot of money from sending only spices. So its clarifies the fact that doing such business helps to boost economy.
To conclude, I would like to say that import n export is very important these days to make more wealth and increase employment in the country. I hope it runs in future as well as it is being done in current period.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...ly fine to import and export because it provide more occupation and increase economy of...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sentence
...dia is famous for its spice production. sentence missing This helps farmers and labor wh...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79295154185 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45901016001 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2598935513 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5333333333 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14760835037 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493980589594 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773682930556 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840025755595 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498024578743 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...ly fine to import and export because it provide more occupation and increase economy of...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sentence
...dia is famous for its spice production. sentence missing This helps farmers and labor wh...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79295154185 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45901016001 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2598935513 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5333333333 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14760835037 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493980589594 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773682930556 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840025755595 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498024578743 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.