In many towns and cities, large shopping malls are replacing small local shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a positive development? Use your own experiences.
These days, with the steady urban development all over the world, replacing small local shops by large shopping malls has become a matter of considerable controversy. Despite widely supported opinion that local shop is usually the heart of community, the comfy place where neighbours meet at weekends, this essay will prove that due to some economical reasons and the better time-management replacing them by malls is mostly a positive development.
To begin with, large city centres normally offer much wider range of products and lower pricing due to wholesale prices from suppliers. Generally, small businesses such as local shops frequently have to rise all prices in their struggling to overcome current economic conditions. For example, the difference between prices on the same bottle of drink water in a local shop and in a mall may be more then AUD 5, which is clearly unfair.
Moreover, the popularity of city centres instead of small shops is still growing because of the significant time saving. Nowadays, people have an exceptional opportunity to buy literally everything in only one place, including even the furniture. For instance, to buy the same products in local shops it would be necessary to spend a couple of days on shopping, which is obviously inappropriate for anyone today.
To summarize, in spite of people's old habits spending some time on local shops, saving precious time, efforts and money make large shopping malls more attractive for many.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... this essay will prove that due to some economical reasons and the better time-management ...
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Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... a local shop and in a mall may be more then AUD 5, which is clearly unfair. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, then, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20168067227 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77184845289 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659663865546 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3847747353 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262707545849 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103352023202 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675373251075 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151980107228 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772743744874 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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