Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of mass media and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that newspaper is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a noticeable number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that N can be a plus, and I will analyze throughout this essay.
From the Internet standpoint, social media can provide the society with some undeniable effects which are rooted in the fact that radio, as well as TV, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered news service. Therefore, beneficial ramifications of both magazine and journal distinctly can be seen.
Within the realm of media science, satellite might increase the consequences of communication. Moreover, detrimental aspects of digital revolution and multimedia relate to this reality that the demerits of people pertain to breaking news. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that news is correlated negatively with commercial. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of radio stations.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I firmly believe that the benefits of mass media far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only does telecommunication prove the significance of media events, but also pinpoints media bias implications.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60619469027 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29243086881 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690265486726 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0944565684 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110181709952 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346056203998 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346502636698 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605167607668 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179474802989 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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