Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
Nowadays, It has become a colossal trend to see that mass media like TV, newspaper, and radio influence people, particularly the young generation. do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society. The substantial influence of mass media like TV, newspaper, and radio influence people, particularly the young generation has sparked the controversy over the potential effect of this the trend on in recent years. In this essay, I shall further elaborate both the sides which would lead to plausible conclusions.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why mass media like TV, newspaper, and radio influence people, particularly the young generation and if it works as a pivot to shape the society. Which includes some ideas like on TV people watch the different type of serials like romantic, drama and emotional. From this TV serials, people think ideas for how to make logical young generation by
watching TV and read newspapers. As an example, If media like TV and newspaper are affected to young generation thinking that it is harmful to them but in the positive way mass media are helping people to get normal news and information through devices and newspapers.
However, It has some disadvantages and some people tend to believe that if people want to watch TV than it is not getting the negative impact on that mind but some time it is helpful. But most of them society people think that mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence items seize peoples freedom and not good for their future. Hence, if they are thinking that mass media are helping to get daily news and information about India and other.
In conclusion, the effect of mass media like TV, newspaper, and radio influence people, particularly the young generation as a pivot to shape the society is prominent, however, it has some demerits that should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 314.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95222929936 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67420554732 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43949044586 0.580463131201 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0284775733 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506444815377 0.242375264174 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218638869597 0.0925447433944 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143116447578 0.071462118173 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314145043702 0.151781067708 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103679623948 0.0609392437508 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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