More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad. Support your arguments with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
In this day and age, many students are studying in overseas universities due to receiving high-level education, cheaper education or even it gives them best professional opportunities. Although it looks great, it is not empty of problems. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some advantages and disadvantages of this viewpoint.
To begin with, there are various positive and negative points on this statement. At first, although it is boring and disadvantage working to pay their costs in a foreign country, the student can get to best level overseas education better than the indoor education system. For example, they can study in reputed universities by professors in the high level of science.
In addition, while away from their parents is an advantage to make the students self-confident, it is hard for some of the students to tolerate away from their family. however, it can because of depression and other mental diseases. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of foreign students left their studying annually because of mental issues and return to their own countries.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the studying at universities abroad, my personal sentiment is that its benefits outweighed of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35680751174 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04195645683 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615023474178 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1350995602 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247359734875 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845800042146 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055739159925 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125682801069 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288821296973 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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