Most high level jobs are done by men. Should government encourage that a certain percentage of these jobsbe reserved for women? What is your opinion?
The importance of government should encourage that a certain percent of government job should be reserved for the women, which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantiual influence of male dominance in governmentr job has sparked the controversy over the potential impacts of this trend in this recent years. It can be said that the government should resreve some percentage of seats for women for the dvelopment of women condtion and increase women empowerment.
At the outset, there are numerious reasons why the government has to reserve seats for women, but the most conspicious one lies from the fact that the women empowerment in the current sitatioin in impoartant and can be done through the help of government efforts. For example, A study conducted in Charles University found that the government helping in maintaing thye job security for women has increased the hiher level of women empowerment. Moreover, job security wilol enhance the women income level too.
Another key justification for upholding this notion ius that the governments encourage on certain percentege of jobs resreved for the women will help to create the situatioin of motivation and independence. In instance, a women having job do not have to depend on thier male income for thier dasily needs. Furthermore, securing job to women will help to build a discipline and moral society in future.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the government reserving women jobs in government sectors is prominent and wilol help to uplift the life status of women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...vation and independence. In instance, a women having job do not have to depend on thi...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...to build a discipline and moral society in future. From what has been discussed above ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2140077821 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88009771199 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9629341618 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386857573196 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166352877975 0.0925447433944 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794867273588 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246679708814 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499305452328 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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