Movie stars and celebrities should be good role model and use their fame to promote worthy causes. To what extent do you agree with this statement ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
People from children to adults have habit of following their favorite star personality. With this as a great opportunity many owners approach celebrities in order to gain fame for their brand and increase productivity. In such cases, it is the responsibility for the role models to guide their followers in the correct path. This essay discusses how important is it for a star to lead their fans in right path.
Across the world individuals have interest in certain person for different reasons. For example, children are mostly attracted to famous cartoon characters as they spend more time watching it, while adults are interested in film actors,cricket players, singers etc. Elderly people are likely to follow politicians or some social activists. This shows that it is very significant for the famous persons to be a good example for their followers. As they are known to many people, it should be kind of their responsibility to care for the welfare of society and their fan-base.
Public are keenly watching their behavior, moves, that celebrities even they commit a small mistake may bring a huge impact. In India, players, actors are committed as the brand ambassador in order to attract people. In specific, advertisements are prepared to promote many foreign products, preserved foods that are against nature which is harmful for health. While on the other hand, some starts work on social issues, participate in cleaning streets, planting trees, extending help to the needy, educating poor children and even in medical activities. Such good promotion encourages followers to do so. We also could spot some fans conduct blood donation camps on their favorite star's birthday that helps at least hundreds of other people.
To conclude, a wrong promotion would lead to a unhealthy society. Celebrities have thousands of fan followers who will do what their star does right from the dressing, lifestyle, body language, dialogues etc. Hence it is very significant for the star figure to educate good habits in order to induce a strong society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, while, at least, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 333.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76387560823 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1914051534 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 6.9802955665 215% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173661209704 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571989666626 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469429908971 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112131125708 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331676962528 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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