Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our
lives. What is your opinion? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days there is an ongoing debate among people about influence of various media sources on our
lives. While it is possible to claim that there is a huge effect on people's lives, the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing the
arguments of both the sides.
There are several reasons why mass media is having an effect on humans. One of them is that
television provides current updates in the form of news. It can also be argued that radio provides
entertainment during the travel time. It should also be taken into account that newspaper keeps us
informed about the current environment. All these play an important role in our life as we are connecte
with these all the time and these help us to take well informed decisions during our daily life.
Those who argue for non influence of public media have a different view and say that it can actually be
a bad thing. Firstly, it is claimed that these media sources waste lots of vaulable time. Then, there
are concerns about without having these sources of information, our life will become dull with no
zeal and energy.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that the mass media has
a significant impact on our life. I would strongly recommend that we should enjoy the mass media
sources and use their information constructively in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82040816327 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46821021005 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567346938776 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8005550144 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8461538462 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977459737763 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390653157904 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355283876216 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0347758044739 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369576939027 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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