Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?

This will be shown by looking at how mass media is the main source of news and entertainment.

Mass media, including TV and radio, is the main source of news. We can only know what is happening in the world and follow the economic trends through the mass media, hence make important decisions concerning our lives. For instance, The New York Times reported in march 2015 that after announcing in the news about the economic problem in the middle east , most investors avoided investing their money there and it dramatically affected the area. Thus, this makes it clear how mass media have important role in our daily decisions.

In addition to that, TV and radio programs have always been the main source of entertaiment in our homes. Moreover, they have great effect on people's behaviours . For example, a recent poll bu the UK govermnent found that 68% of house wives and children spend more time watching entertainment shows than doing other activities.

In conclusion, since the mass media now has become an imperative source of information, news and even entertainment , it is obvious that it's importance and effect on our lives is increasing dramatically everyday. Hence, it is advised that communities start to use it wisely , to be able to avoid any negative ramifications.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01401869159 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80329279012 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658878504673 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8268422491 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249798581002 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102925222363 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090852758812 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129792480559 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657614771926 0.0609392437508 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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