Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
In recent years, television has taken an eminent role among the society. The importance of television in each and every home is rapidly increasing due its various benefits, especially among elder people and housewives. this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of television and how it act as our companion of daily lives.
At the outset, in this globalised village, people are more dependent on the technologies especially, television for the myriad of reasons including spread of news and forecasting of weather. televisions takes an pivotal role for spreading news and making us to aware of the weather. For instance, these things help us to know much about the world and the political backgrounds, moreover, weather forecasting help us to be more alert while going outside.
On the other hand, there is another side for this television as it give addiction to the children and the people who are jobless. For instance, we make children to sit in front of some cartoon programs or any other programs to make them eat, this make them addicted to that program. moreover, they lose concentration in their studies.
In conclusion, television is a good companion for everybody in this busy world as it provide lot more information to us about the world we live. In my opinion, think about the positive side of the television, and learn how to utilize it a hastily way, so that television can be a good companion for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98347107438 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86251215217 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9686435224 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271900930173 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102314824447 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651305276631 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15141793111 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036829142053 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.