Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this.
In this modern epoch, it is an irrefutable fact that television plays an integral and indispensable part in one's life. television is one of the wonders of miraclesand it has given a impact in the field of science, communication and entertainment.
To set the ball rolling with the myraid advantages of television is that it has a source of information and interyainment. First and foremost reason is that television gives news from all over the world. Second of the same benefit is when masses feel stressful, it gives piece of mind.
On the other hand, similarly,"Like every rose has thorns" it has few disadvantages as well. Initially,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s an integral and indispensable part in ones life. television is one of the wonders ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Television
...al and indispensable part in ones life. television is one of the wonders of miraclesand it...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the wonders of miraclesand it has given a impact in the field of science, communi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ience, communication and entertainment. To set the ball rolling with the myraid ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...feel stressful, it gives piece of mind. On the other hand, similarly,'Like ...
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... mind. On the other hand, similarly,'Like every rose has thorns' it has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, similarly, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 31.9359605911 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 551.0 1207.87684729 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 107.0 242.827586207 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14953271028 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 3.92707691288 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49612665152 2.71678728327 129% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 139.433497537 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663551401869 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 379.143842365 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9685412079 50.4703680194 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796040847524 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342522491709 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614818879593 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045174310182 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505347681534 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 55.0591133005 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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