Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Juvenile crimes have become a controversial issue among all societies while it is increasing at an alarming rate. Although some people believed it is their parent’s responsibility to take care of their faults, I am inclined to assume that there are many factors affecting children’s behavior and it is not only the parent’s fault. This essay will examine both sides according to some academic evidence before concluding.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why I think parents should not blame for their offspring’s crime. Firstly, an array of inhabitants argued that no matter how much parents try their best for upbringing their children in a right way, it is finally the child decides to commit a crime. Secondly, they use an essential valid logic to support the crucial role of mass media in violence attitudes of children. Research conducted by Melbourne University could be a sufficient example to clarify the impact of computer games on increasing the rate of violence on children due to their violent scene conjunction with crime rate among youngsters. Hence, the role of society and their friends could not be overestimated.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that parental control plays a pivotal role in children’s pedagogy. Therefore, they should be held accountable for their children’s fault due to the fact that they have the majority effects on their offspring’s social behaviors when they tend to shape their moral compass and character from the very young age. For instance, according to 2014 statistic in the US, most offenses were made by the juveniles who were violently abused by their parent in criminal ways.
To conclude, while the role of parents is essential in children upbringing, my sentiment is that parents should not be solely blamed for their children’s actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24915824916 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05718714265 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0509833394 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173777412048 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699584900636 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577288101906 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131190964621 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035132057029 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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