Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
In this day and age, the subject regarding whether parents are responsible for their children’s acts and
behavior has become a heated debate. Although contested by many, a substantial number of people
hold true the notion that parents should take responsibility of their child’s actions, which I support it.
This will be analyzed in this essay.
For one, it is commonly accepted that children are blank slate and they absorb even the tiniest bits of
information from their parents. For example, a 5 years old boy can easily learn coarse language, if his
parents talk to each in an abusive way. This example clearly shows that children are like sponge and
their characters can be easily shaped by their parents’. Thus, it is quite evident why this idea has
garnered support.
In addition, parents act as the child’s leaders, and for this they are accountable for teaching social
behavior to their child as well as disciplining him. As my own experience, my (never-born!) nephew
used to bring home his friend’s toys whenever he went to his house for playing. His parents talked
with him and explained to him to why this unauthorized action is not a correct one. As this
unacceptable manner could have been become a habit, parents’ role to discipline the children and to
teach them what is wrong and what is correct is quite evident. This example fortifies the argument
why parents are responsible for their children’s behavior.
To conclude, after analyzing how parents’ own behavior can mirror their child’s in addition to their
leadership role, it has been proven that why they should be accountable for what their kid does.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 20.9802955665 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2299270073 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95673825944 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6198596845 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230177826261 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100096494246 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801401782168 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926133899697 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834089319956 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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