Parents are responsible for their children’s behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, it has become a growing trend for parents to teach their children about behavior and way of life. As such, there are both merit and demerit to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
At the outset, there is a myriad of argument in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that in order to become well behave and decent, it is very important to learn the concept of these terms which includes behavior and manner.Thanks to parents who are responsible for the brought up of their child from birth to toddler. Not only can parents teach their children about way of living, but also can they encourage their child to behave in a good manner in front of every one.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of child behavior responsibility. The primary one stems from the fact that by imposing too much orders on children in early age can results in increasing negativity in child brain, for instance hate, enemy and discrimination, parents can be responsible for all these factors. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the topic.
In view of the above outlined arguments, one can conclude that the benefits of well behaved children because of parents are indeed to great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'demerits'?
Suggestion: demerits
...life. As such, there are both merit and demerit to this trend, although I am of the opi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thanks
...erms which includes behavior and manner.Thanks to parents who are responsible for the ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...tems from the fact that by imposing too much orders on children in early age can res...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...uch orders on children in early age can results in increasing negativity in child brain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72566371681 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53451389232 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570796460177 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2539074086 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218629726137 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843086390452 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766879511019 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132704411633 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373403609322 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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