Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s activities. What is your opinion?
Parents are the first mentor for the children. Parents should be held legally responsible the children’s act has created the chaos in the country. Some people opine that parents are the solely responsible for the children’s activities while some people are not inclined to this stance. However, I firmly agree with the above statement and in the following point, I would deliver why I agree with this.
Starting from the upbringing and till the adolescence, parenting plays a pivotal role in children’s life. In addition, Child is mostly learning new things by imitating and observing his surroundings which plays a fundamental role in his life. Moreover, he learns rituals, customs, and other things from his parents as well as grandparents so if the parents are following the better way of behaving with other then children will automatically adopt that practice.
Going ahead, good parenting also includes, make the child responsible for his faults and to overcome the certain things. Furthermore, good parenting also includes taking the responsibility for children’s activities. For example, the famous scientist Thomas Edison once has been dismissed from school and his mother does the homeschooling and upbringing of him, however, if his mother has even thought that school has done the right job then we would never meet the great mind perhaps.
In the view of the above points, one can reach the conclusion that parenting plays a focal role in children’s lives and they must be responsible for his act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
...llowing the better way of behaving with other then children will automatically adopt that ...
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Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...g the better way of behaving with other then children will automatically adopt that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29795918367 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0283018748 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575510204082 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8733299029 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355400934801 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166292457857 0.0925447433944 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14117445103 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219389046579 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939008057405 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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