people argue that experience better teacher than formal education do you agree or disagree

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people argue that experience better teacher than formal education? do you agree or disagree

In this advancing era, developments can be seen cosmically. However, the debatable side of many of these advancements has now become more controversial. Likewise, some masses reckon that experience is better teacher than formal education, while others contradict their claim. In my perspective, this issue has both aspects positive as well as negative. The following exposition will further bolster my view in this regard.
To embark upon, there are multifarious aspects favor the proposition, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that formal degree is assist in getting employment. Besides, there is no fallacy in arguing that going to schools, colleges, and universities improves the knowledge to a large extent and develops the cognition. Even, it is indeed a fact that certain personality traits are development like sense of responsibility, leadership, social awareness and so on beside this, building of morals, ethics and etiquette.
To contradiction, it would be justifiable to assert that today there are various sources of knowledge other than degree such as internet, group discussion, attending workshops and meetings. Information received through these ways combined with working professionally makes one a wholesome personality. Another substantial equivalent in addition to this is that through experience, we understand how world works and how to develop our skills accordingly. At last, above all, employers give more importance to experience over mere degree holders. For example, Steve jobs, Albert Einstein all dropouts did wonder in this respective fields.
To recapitulate, since strong and validating points are there in favoring of the proposition, so I would clinch to saying that with the rational and for sighted approach make the human life more fruitful.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chores'' or 'chore's'?
Suggestion: chores'; chore's
...e responsibility of family and domestic chores etcetera, become a cause of frustration...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, likewise, so, while, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25769230769 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99787646737 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2570245813 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206127767084 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558528271413 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10425710848 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984249572268 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088304195155 0.0609392437508 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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