The problem of overcrowding should be solved by city planners rather than policies to control population.
Nowadays, day by day increasing population in many cities. So, every individuals are facting lot of problems especially overcrowding. Although it can be said that population may be main reason for overcrowding but it will be taken to action and make proper planning in the cities so that it would be possible to decline that situation. I will discuss my points in further paragraphs.
First of all, if the plan would make properly, the city can make to decline overcrowding, it means proper places and space for moving freely without hurdle on any routes. Moreover, it should be made proper planning to prepare broad road ways like six lanes or more, it can reduce overcrowding. Second, wherever we can go in the city the main thing is parking problem so that it should be made basement parking systems. In additon, also we cannot ignor the traffic problem that common problem today and mostly occur these situations when cross roads so it would be better to make overfly bridge which can help to reduce the overcrowding as well as less accidents.
Moreover, government should make strict rules and regulations for parking system so no one try to park their vehicles on roads. Furthermore, open street market and store should be banned by government. In addition, government should try to develop rural areas so automatically the population in the cities could be possible to decline.
To sum-up, it is fact that population never decrease in the world so every people and government have responsibilities that they should get together to solve the problem of population in cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun accidents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 6.10837438424 311% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00754716981 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8025975847 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2726164055 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219131495198 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812578593319 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558647701659 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134934104915 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220286334421 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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