producing clean energy is an impossible goal, instaed we need to focus on reducing energy consumption. how far do you agree
Clean energy is an impossible goal and we all agree. However, by how much we can reduce the emission is what we must aim to. We must focus on energy consumption and by how much we can control it. There are many measures that we can take to control it. However, let us look at some of these.
To begin with, climate change is the biggest threat our generation is currently facing. Hence, to tackle this government, institutions across the globe have set energy emission standards to euro VI as per the Paris climate changes accord. This will result is the reduction of particulate matter, thereby help in maintaining the required emission levels.
Secondly, there is a debate among industry bodies to focus on alternative energy. Many have suggested the introduction of electric vehicles in the automobile industry. Many companies such as Tesla, GM, Hyundai have already added electric vehicles to their fleet. Use of such alternative energy will help control energy consumption such as petrol and diesel.
Thirdly, we must also reduce the use of private vehicles and increase the use of public transport. One research stated that a total of 50 car is equivalent to that of one bus. Thus promoting the use of public transport will help reduce energy consumption.
Thus, to conclude, implementation of emission standards, the use of alternative fuels and promoting the use of public transport will help in control the use of energy consumption. This will make our planet a cleaner place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'car' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cars'.
Suggestion: cars
... One research stated that a total of 50 car is equivalent to that of one bus. Thus ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will help reduce energy consumption. Thus, to conclude, implementation of emi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01984126984 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74408994102 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2623705339 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4117647059 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233450453414 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800778563784 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10597228026 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116473376143 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905587227667 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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