Some people agree laws changes human behavior but some disagree. Do you agree with it?

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Some people agree laws changes human behavior but some disagree. Do you agree with it?

The implication of laws changes human behavior where as some disagree. Which is fairly debatable has now further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence for subject has generated further discussed over the potential impact of this trend. I believe that I am sure this topic. A person is totally change to change argue laws changes and this will be further discussed before reaching logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are diverse reasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that and this can be contributing factor to man is totally change to change the laws changes for instance, a research invariably show that this is new man difficult to follow this law. Therefore, the negative impact of that can be denied.
Nevertheless, some people adopt on opposing view and trend to believe that this is not good can be addressed some position facets as well as there are innumerable facts in favor of that the common man to difficult the follow to change laws but the most pre-dominant one stems from the fact that which is not only. But also as an illustration, findings some studies reveal that this is not good to different countries people. Hence, the importance that is undeniable.
The implication of can be debated, but the fact remains that there were several factors that lead to theme and matters. Eventually, according to the above analysis, it can be concluded that. It can be predicted that can be in the near future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...lication of laws changes human behavior where as some disagree. Which is fairly debatabl...
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Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... human behavior where as some disagree. Which is fairly debatable has now further att...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...am sure this topic. A person is totally change to change argue laws changes and this w...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...e contributing factor to man is totally change to change the laws changes for instance...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...vor of that the common man to difficult the follow to change laws but the most pre-dominan...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edicted that can be in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 5.94088669951 269% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90196078431 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65147344295 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517647058824 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.8253400549 50.4703680194 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174281727892 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686938705207 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121429451843 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109470486907 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758731392014 0.0609392437508 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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